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ESSAY:Do you think stress is ever good, useful, or necessary? Why or why not?
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Stress is not good for the healthy life.

>>Stress is not good for having a healthy life.

Sometimes, it makes people get cancer.

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But I think it is need-able because of the reasons below.
>>But I think is needed because of the reasons below.
If there is no stress, than the life might be boring.

>>If there is no stress, life might be boring.

For example, if there is a candle and a guy turns on the light in the bright area.

>>For example, if there is a candle and a guy turns on the light to brighten the area.

He will not know how the candle is precious since he will not realize the light is bright.

>>He will not know how precious the candle.

On the other hand, there is a guy who has match in the dark area.

>>On the other hand, there is a guy who has a match in the dark area.

When he turns on it, he will see all the things around him and he will realize how the thing is precious.

>>When he turns it on, he will see all the things around him and he will realize how precious those things are.

 I think enough stress brings the same logic.
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In conclusion, the stress is necessary to make a life to be fun.

>>In conclusion, stress is necessary to make life fun.

 Furthermore, it will gives people having motivation.

>> Furthermore, it will give people motivation.

So I would like to say it is useful when people know how to handle it.

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