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2019-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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Irene~ I am so sad to hear that news from you. Tears come in to my eyes when I think that I cannot hear your lovely voice again. You are not only a teacher but also my good friend. I am sure that I miss you and our conversation about many topics. I learned a lot of things from you and you made me think over diverse issues. And sometimes, I became a fool cause laughing out alone in my office (when you made me laugh out on the phone) I think I am still not strong enough to be apart from a close friend. I know I have to let you go for your health but I am sure that you will come back. Won\'t you? I will not say good bye today. See you tomorrow!!

강사 첨삭

Hellos Ms. [이름]!  Thank you for considering me as your friend. I really appreciate and value your friendship. ^_^

~. T. Irene ~

Irene~
I am so sad to hear that news from you.

>>>  Correct. (Me too! I felt sad in telling the news to you. )  
 Tears come in to my eyes when I think that I cannot hear your lovely voice again.

>>>  Tears came out my eyes when I realized that I won\'t be hearing your lovely voice again.   
 You are not only a teacher but also my good friend.

>>> Correct.    
 I am sure that I miss you and our conversation about many topics.

>>>   I am sure that I will miss you and our conversation about many topics. 
 I learned a lot of things from you and you made me think over diverse issues.

 >>> Correct.    
And sometimes, I became a fool cause laughing out alone in my office (when you made me laugh out on the phone)

>>>  And sometimes, you make me look like a fool when I laugh alone in my office. (I was talking to you on the phone.)  
 I think I am still not strong enough to be apart from a close friend.

>>> Correct.   
 I know I have to let you go for your health but I am sure that you will come back. Won\'t you?

>>>     I know I have to let you go for your health but I am sure that you will come back. Will you?
 I will not say good bye today.
See you tomorrow!!

>>> Correct.   

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