homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hellos Ms. [이름]! Thank you for considering me as your friend. I really appreciate and value your friendship. ^_^
~. T. Irene ~
Irene~
I am so sad to hear that news from you.
>>> Correct. (Me too! I felt sad in telling the news to you. )
Tears come in to my eyes when I think that I cannot hear your lovely voice again.
>>> Tears came out my eyes when I realized that I won\'t be hearing your lovely voice again.
You are not only a teacher but also my good friend.
>>> Correct.
I am sure that I miss you and our conversation about many topics.
>>> I am sure that I will miss you and our conversation about many topics.
I learned a lot of things from you and you made me think over diverse issues.
>>> Correct.
And sometimes, I became a fool cause laughing out alone in my office (when you made me laugh out on the phone)
>>> And sometimes, you make me look like a fool when I laugh alone in my office. (I was talking to you on the phone.)
I think I am still not strong enough to be apart from a close friend.
>>> Correct.
I know I have to let you go for your health but I am sure that you will come back. Won\'t you?
>>> I know I have to let you go for your health but I am sure that you will come back. Will you?
I will not say good bye today.
See you tomorrow!!
>>> Correct.
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