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2019-06-28 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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My country trend is changing fast. More details,many people copy many things like entertainer. For example put on clothes. Make up And accessory. Korea soccer kids like back digits 7 because heung min son. What is your duty in your job? My duty is they know that how to play soccer and they enjoy playing soccer. I haven\'t met my relatives thesedays because my family have been busy. My university friend is gonna accompany my working holiday in Australia. I haven\'t played ballet before.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!

~Teacher Lucy

My country trend is changing fast.

>>CORRECT!

>>My country trend is fast changing.

More details, many people copy many things like entertainer. For example put on clothes. Make up And accessory.

>>For more details, many people copy many things like entertainers. For example putting on clothes , make up and accessories.

Korea soccer kids like back digits 7 because heung min son.

>>Korea soccer kids like wearing clothes with the digit 7 because of Heung Min Son.

What is your duty in your job?

>>CORRECT!

My duty is they know that how to play soccer and they enjoy playing soccer.

>>My duty is to let them know how to play soccer and they should enjoy playing soccer.

I haven\'t met my relatives these days because my family have been busy.

>>CORRECT!

My university friend is gonna accompany my working holiday in Australia.
>>My university friend is going to accompany me working in Australia.

I haven\'t played ballet before.

>>I haven\'t tried ballet before.

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