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Hello [이름]
Thank you for your homework, very good!!!!
I can see you\'re trying hard to learn. Your discipline is good, keep it up. Keep applying in your daily life what you learn every day. Knowledge will give you power. Power will give the confidence that you need. You can do it if others can, so can you. Enjoy your day! ^^
T. Jeny
ESSAY: What is the most difficult class you have taken so far?
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I forget the class name but it was the hardest class to me.
>>I forgot the name of the class but it was the hardest class for me.
Professor wanted us to make a group for presentation.
>>The professor wanted us to make a group presentation.
The group was made by drawing lots and there were no persons who wanted to be a group leader.
>>The group was created by draw lots and there was no one who wanted to be the group leader.
So, I became a leader of that group and we took each positions.
>>So, I became the leader of the group and we took each of our tasks.
Someone needed to search the internet gathering the information, other one needed to do site survey, and two guys collected all the information and made power point document for the presentation.
>>Someone was assigned to search the internet for information, another one was assigned to do a site survey, and two guys collected all the information and made powerpoint document for the presentation.
And I was the one who needed to do presentation in front of the audience.
>> And I was the one who needed to do the presentation in front of the audience.
Unfortunately, more than half people had disappeared during weekend and hadn\'t gotten phone call too.
>>Unfortunately, more than half of the people disappeared during the weekend and I didn\'t get a phone call too.
Thus, I needed to search, made presentation document, did presentation too. After that, I tried to avoid taking a group class since I didn\'t want to see the same happen.
>>Thus, I searched the internet, made the presentation document, and did presentation too. After that, I tried to avoid taking a group class since I didn\'t want the same thing to happen again.
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