Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
The relationship between I and I have known people will improve our relationship if our time pass.
>>The relationship between I and the people I known will improve as time pass.
I always have to accompany and drive for my soceekids when i pick up soccer kids.
>>I always have to drive and pick up my students in soccer class.
Script-I can\'t make it.
the word script can\'t make for sentence.
>>I can\'t make a sentence using the word script.
I would like to go somewhere these days.
>>CORRECT!
>>I would like to go anywhere these days.
Hopefully my girlfriend and i will be fine when i am in Australia.
>>CORRECT!
>>Hopefully, my girlfriend and i will be fine when i am in Australia.
A few years ago,managing my company documents was my job.
>>A few years ago, managing my company\'s documents was my job.
I think all time appointments is important so I try to be appointment area on time but I sometimes don\'t keep to be on time.
>>I think all appointments are important so I try to be prompt but I sometimes not on time.
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