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2019-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

1. What’s your comfort food? It is a kimchi stew that my mother used to cook for me. When I was younger, my parents was very busy. They went out early and came back late. My mother woke up very early and cooked many foods for us. After they went out, my siblings and I had a breakfast and went to school. Sometimes, they came back after 9pm. In that case, we had a dinner with foods that my mom cooked in the morning. She had to cook a lot of portion of foods. It was so delicious and made me comfort. Now I feel it was my mother\'s love of us. I tried to cook like her. But I can\'t make same taste. She becomes too old to cook many foods and our siblings don\'t live in same place any more. I\'m so sad that I can\'t taste it anymore. Time flies so fast.....

강사 첨삭

Thank you Ms. [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy



It is a kimchi stew that my mother used to cook for me.

>>CORRECT!

>>My mother used to cook kimchee stew for me.


When I was younger, my parents was very busy. 

>>When I was younger, my parents were very busy. 


They went out early and came back late.

>>CORRECT!

>>They go to work early and come home late. 


My mother woke up very early and cooked many foods for us.

>>CORRECT!

>>My mother gets up early and cooks various food. 


After they went out, my siblings and I had a breakfast and went to school. 

>>CORRECT!

>>My siblings and I have to eat breakfast and go to school after our parents went out.


Sometimes, they came back after 9pm.

>>CORRECT!

>>Sometimes they come home after 9 pm.


In that case, we had a dinner with foods that my mom cooked in the morning.

>>In that case, we had a dinner with the food that my mom cooked in the morning.


She had to cook a lot of portion of foods.

>>CORRECT!

>>She had to cook that will accumulated in three meals.  


It was so delicious and made me comfort.

>>It was so delicious and gave me comfort.


Now I feel it was my mother\'s love of us. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I suddenly realize that it\'s our mother\'s love. 


I tried to cook like her.

>>CORRECT!

>>I started to cook.


But I can\'t make same taste.  

>>CORRECT!

>>But it doesn\'t taste like her recipe. 


She becomes too old to cook many foods and our siblings don\'t live in same place any more.

>>CORRECT!

>>She\'s too old to cook and my siblings don\'t live in the same place anymore.


I\'m so sad that I can\'t taste it anymore. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I\'m so sad that I can\'t eat it anymore.


Time flies so fast.....

>>CORRECT!

>>Time is like a blink of an eye.

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