homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
It is a kimchi stew that my mother used to cook for me.
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>>My mother used to cook kimchee stew for me.
When I was younger, my parents was very busy.
>>When I was younger, my parents were very busy.
They went out early and came back late.
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>>They go to work early and come home late.
My mother woke up very early and cooked many foods for us.
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>>My mother gets up early and cooks various food.
After they went out, my siblings and I had a breakfast and went to school.
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>>My siblings and I have to eat breakfast and go to school after our parents went out.
Sometimes, they came back after 9pm.
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>>Sometimes they come home after 9 pm.
In that case, we had a dinner with foods that my mom cooked in the morning.
>>In that case, we had a dinner with the food that my mom cooked in the morning.
She had to cook a lot of portion of foods.
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>>She had to cook that will accumulated in three meals.
It was so delicious and made me comfort.
>>It was so delicious and gave me comfort.
Now I feel it was my mother\'s love of us.
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>>I suddenly realize that it\'s our mother\'s love.
I tried to cook like her.
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>>I started to cook.
But I can\'t make same taste.
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>>But it doesn\'t taste like her recipe.
She becomes too old to cook many foods and our siblings don\'t live in same place any more.
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>>She\'s too old to cook and my siblings don\'t live in the same place anymore.
I\'m so sad that I can\'t taste it anymore.
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>>I\'m so sad that I can\'t eat it anymore.
Time flies so fast.....
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>>Time is like a blink of an eye.
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