Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is your favorite appetizer, main course and dessert when you eat out? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
I like a favorite appetizer that is salad. Because the salad is light, getting healthy. And I like most of seafood&steak in main course. Basically It is grilled Crab and Meat. Finally, The dessert like sweet of somethings. It is ice-cream, cake, cookies, and so on.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
These are all so delicious.
You have chosen well.
You also expressed yourself in a clear manner.
I\'m looking forward to your next composition.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I like a favorite appetizer that is salad. >> My favorite appetizer is a salad.
Because the salad is light, getting healthy.
>> This is because a salad is light and healthy.
And I like most of seafood&steak in main course.
>> The main course that I like the most is seafood and steak.
Basically It is grilled Crab and Meat.
>> Specifically, I like grilled crab and meat.
Finally, The dessert like sweet of somethings.
>> Finally, I like something sweet for dessert.
It is ice-cream, cake, cookies, and so on.
>> I like ice cream, cake, cookies and others.
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