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2019-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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When my friend go to the military i said him I can\'t accompany with you because I have to go to the university. I have been swamped in a week so I can\'t meet her but now I am not swamped I can meet her in a week. The road of Seoul is very bustling I think you take a public transport more than car. When is your holiday? How long do you have holiday? I think soccer is relative thing. You should check your flight time table and don\'t be late. I like a pictorial book more than picture less book. Let\'s get some drink beer. How about it? Let\'s get playing soccer. I think many drinking beer sometimes make what a sudden fighting people each other. It is delicious food .i think there is a reasonable why this restaurant is famous.

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~Teacher Lucy



When my friend go to the military i said him I can\'t accompany with you because I have to go to the university.

>>When my friend went to the military I told him that I can\'t accompany him because I have to go to the university.

I have been swamped in a week so I can\'t meet her but now I am not swamped I can meet her in a week.

>>I have been swamped in a week so I can\'t meet her but now I am not so I can meet her.

The road of Seoul is very bustling I think you take a public transport more than car.

>>I think you take a public transport more than a car because od the bustling road in Seoul.

When is your holiday?

>>CORRECT!

>>When are you going to have a holiday?


How long do you have holiday?

>>CORRECT!

>>How long do you have a holiday?

I think soccer is relative thing.

>>CORRECT!

>>I think soccer is relative.


You should check your flight time table and don\'t be late.

>>CORRECT!

I like a pictorial book more than picture less book.

>>CORRECT!

Let\'s get some drink beer. How about it?

>>Let\'s get some drink beer. How about that?


Let\'s get playing soccer.

>>Let\'s play soccer.

I think many drinking beer sometimes make what a sudden fighting people each other.

>>I think drinking a lot of beer sometimes results to sudden fighting with people.

It is delicious food .i think there is a reasonable why this restaurant is famous.

>>It is a delicious food. I think it\'s reasonable why this restaurant is famous.

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