Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~Teacher Lucy
When my friend go to the military i said him I can\'t accompany with you because I have to go to the university.
>>When my friend went to the military I told him that I can\'t accompany him because I have to go to the university.
I have been swamped in a week so I can\'t meet her but now I am not swamped I can meet her in a week.
>>I have been swamped in a week so I can\'t meet her but now I am not so I can meet her.
The road of Seoul is very bustling I think you take a public transport more than car.
>>I think you take a public transport more than a car because od the bustling road in Seoul.
When is your holiday?
>>CORRECT!
>>When are you going to have a holiday?
How long do you have holiday?
>>CORRECT!
>>How long do you have a holiday?
I think soccer is relative thing.
>>CORRECT!
>>I think soccer is relative.
You should check your flight time table and don\'t be late.
>>CORRECT!
I like a pictorial book more than picture less book.
>>CORRECT!
Let\'s get some drink beer. How about it?
>>Let\'s get some drink beer. How about that?
Let\'s get playing soccer.
>>Let\'s play soccer.
I think many drinking beer sometimes make what a sudden fighting people each other.
>>I think drinking a lot of beer sometimes results to sudden fighting with people.
It is delicious food .i think there is a reasonable why this restaurant is famous.
>>It is a delicious food. I think it\'s reasonable why this restaurant is famous.
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