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I don\'t think there is much chance that Kim Jong-un will visit the White House. Because he is a dictator and has a strong obsession with nuclear weapons, he is unlikely to give up nuclear weapons.
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Hi Ms. [Name]^^
Well, I am actually hoping for the greater good about this nuclear weapons.
I think he might visit the White House someday to try some hamburgers - hahaha kidding :)
Thank you for your answer my friend!
I don\'t think there is much chance that Kim Jong-un will visit the White House.
>>CORRECT!
Because he is a dictator and has a strong obsession with nuclear weapons, he is unlikely to give up nuclear weapons.
>>CORRECT!
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