homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you Ms. [이름]!
Don\'t worry Ms. [이름]. The homework is for your application. It\'s an opinion-based. :)
~Teacher Lucy
It depends on the subject.
>>CORRECT!
There are two reasons.
>>CORRECT!
>>There are two ways.
One is I\'m lazy.
>>CORRECT!
>>First, I procrastinate.
I don\'t want to think deeply about something.
>>CORRECT!
>>I don\'t want to ponder something rooted.
Other people do know better than me.
>>CORRECT!
>>They know better.
I just follow their instruction.
>>CORRECT!
>>I just follow their instructions.
For example, my friends recommended the cheapest and the best beauty salon where I\'ve never heard.
>>CORRECT!
>>For example, my friends recommended the cheapest and the best beauty salon where I\'ve never went to.
It was a good choice.
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s a perfect choice.
The other reason is I\'m a indecisive person.
>>CORRECT!
>>My decisions are changeable.
I can\'t predict all numbers of cases and find every information.
>>CORRECT!
>>It\'s unpredictable.
So, I ask them about problem that I face to.
>>CORRECT!
>>So, I ask them about problem that I face.
It may not be a exact answer.
>>It may not be the exact answer.
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