homework

2019-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

1. Which is better, having new things or keeping old things? It depends on the subject. 2. Why do you care about what others think of you? There are two reasons. One is I\'m lazy. I don\'t want to think deeply about something. Other people do know better than me. I just follow their instruction. For example, my friends recommended the cheapest and the best beauty salon where I\'ve never heard. It was a good choice. The other reason is I\'m a indecisive person. I can\'t predict all numbers of cases and find every information. So, I ask them about problem that I face to. My answer is so awkward. It may not be a exact answer.

강사 첨삭

Thank you Ms. [이름]!


Don\'t worry Ms. [이름]. The homework is for your application. It\'s an opinion-based. :)


~Teacher Lucy


It depends on the subject.

>>CORRECT!

There are two reasons.

>>CORRECT!

>>There are two ways.


One is I\'m lazy.

>>CORRECT!

>>First, I procrastinate.


I don\'t want to think deeply about something. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I don\'t want to ponder something rooted.


Other people do know better than me.  

>>CORRECT!

>>They know better. 


I just follow their instruction. 

>>CORRECT!

>>I just follow their instructions.


For example, my friends recommended the cheapest and the best beauty salon where I\'ve never heard.

>>CORRECT!

>>For example, my friends recommended the cheapest and the best beauty salon where I\'ve never went to.


It was a good choice.

>>CORRECT!

>>It\'s a perfect choice.

The other reason is I\'m a indecisive person.

>>CORRECT!

>>My decisions are changeable.


I can\'t predict
all numbers of cases and find every information.

>>CORRECT!

>>It\'s unpredictable.


So, I ask them about problem that I face to.

>>CORRECT!

>>So, I ask them about problem that I face.


It may not be a exact answer.

>>It may not be the exact answer.

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