homework
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What was your best travel experience?- (^-^)
It is so difficult to say that the best travel I \'ve ever gone because I had always good time when I travled.
If I tell you the most regretable travel, I say it was my honeymoon.
I went to Maldives and stayed a so beautiful and luxuary resort island for a week.
I and my husband was so exited and surprised with the beautiful ocean.
We unpacked and went to beach right away and palyed into the sea like children at first day of the honeymoon.
Next day, when we woke up in the morning, we are both got sunburn hardly all our body .
From that day until we left Maldivies, we couldn\'t hug or touch even more we could not sleep on a same bed during the honeymoon.
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On a second thoughts, It is a funny memory to us now. But I am still thinking we were so fool.
If I could make time for 2 weeks holidays , I really want to go Maldives again to swim in the sea and have a great night with my husband.
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Hi [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you so much for this lovely homework and for sharing your experience! I could just imagine you guys really wanting to be close to each other, but thanks to your \"foolishness\" ^ ^ you got sunburned and can\'t actually be close to each other! ^ ^
What about sunblock? I wonder..^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
It is so difficult to say that the best travel I \'ve ever gone because I had always good time when I travled.
>>It is so difficult to say the best travel experience I\'ve ever had because I always had a good time when I travel.
If I tell you the most regretable travel, I say it was my honeymoon.
If I tell you the most regretable travel, I say it was my honeymoon.
>>If I tell you the most regrettable travel experience, I would say it was my honeymoon.
I went to Maldives and stayed a so beautiful and luxuary resort island for a week.
I went to Maldives and stayed a so beautiful and luxuary resort island for a week.
>>I went to Maldives and stayed at a very beautiful and luxurious resort island for a week.
I and my husband was so exited and surprised with the beautiful ocean.
I and my husband was so exited and surprised with the beautiful ocean.
>>I and my husband were so excited and marveled at the beautiful ocean.
We unpacked and went to beach right away and palyed into the sea like children at first day of the honeymoon.
We unpacked and went to beach right away and palyed into the sea like children at first day of the honeymoon.
>>At the first day of our honeymoon, we unpacked and went to the beach right away and played in the sea like children.
Next day, when we woke up in the morning, we are both got sunburn hardly all our body.
Next day, when we woke up in the morning, we are both got sunburn hardly all our body.
>>The next day when we woke up, the whole of our bodies were sunburned.
From that day until we left Maldivies, we couldn\'t hug or touch even more we could not sleep on a same bed during the honeymoon.
>>From that day until we left Maldives, we couldn\'t hug or touch each other, more so; we could not sleep in the same bed! ^ ^
On a second thoughts, It is a funny memory to us now. But I am still thinking we were so fool.
From that day until we left Maldivies, we couldn\'t hug or touch even more we could not sleep on a same bed during the honeymoon.
>>From that day until we left Maldives, we couldn\'t hug or touch each other, more so; we could not sleep in the same bed! ^ ^
On a second thoughts, It is a funny memory to us now. But I am still thinking we were so fool.
>>Looking back, it\'s a funny memory for us now, but I still feel that we were so foolish then.
If I could make time for 2 weeks holidays , I really want to go Maldives again to swim in the sea and have a great night with my husband.
If I could make time for 2 weeks holidays , I really want to go Maldives again to swim in the sea and have a great night with my husband.
>>If I would have the chance for a 2 week holiday, I really want to go to Maldives again and swim in the sea and have a great night with my husband.
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