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2019-07-04 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

학생이 쓴 원문

I have never been joyride before but I have seen it. I think a sudden happiness go sudden away. I have worked instead my friend because of my friend was busy. I told my friend I need your hand when I moved another home. I\'m sorry to bother you I\'ll be quite. Please meet me I need to tell you something. How may I help you?

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!

~Teacher Lucy

I have never been joyride before but I have seen it.

>>I have never tried joyriding but I heard it.

I think a sudden happiness go sudden away.

>>I think a sudden happiness goes immediately.

I have worked instead my friend because of my friend was busy.

>>I have worked instead because my friend was busy.

I told my friend I need your hand when I moved another home.

>>I told my friend, \"I need your hand\", when I moved to another house.

I\'m sorry to bother you I\'ll be quite.

>>CORRECT!

>>I\'m sorry to trouble you, I\'ll be quite.

Please meet me I need to tell you something.

>>CORRECT!

>>Please meet me, I need to tell you something.

How may I help you?

>>CORRECT!

>>How can I help you?

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