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Hi, [이름]! ^^
It\'s true, Seoul has a very big influence in Korea.
Unfortunately, Seoul is not a country. ^^
A country is characterized as a state or a nation.
Examples of countries are China, Philippines, USA and many more!
But this was a good composition!
Thank you so much for trying your best. ^^
~~t. Ally
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I think the biggest influence country is Seoul in korea.
>> I think the biggest city that influences Korea is Seoul.
Seoul is the capital of korea. So Seoul is very big and wonderful city.
>> Seoul is the capital of Korea, so it\'s a very big and wonderful city.
There are many forienger people live in Seoul. and Many people are sensitive to trend.
>> There are many foreigners who live in Seoul, and many people are quite sensitive to the trend.
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