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Hi Jadah.
Did you have a lunch? Don\\\'t skip your meal for your health!
As you said, I also felt that 10 min is not enough to converse in English.
So, I decided to have 20 min class 2 or 3 times a week.
But I found something I could not understand.
It was very wired because 2 times a week for 20 min class is more expensive than 5 times a week for 10 min class.
I could not understand because as you see, 10 min class is longer than 20 min calss in the total times.
And forthermore 20 min class gives just twice writing corrections.( I like writting Essey)
I called the custumer center of Power English and asked why 20 min class is more expensive than 10 min class.
They said that 10 min class is the promotional program to spread Power English in On line English school market.
I understad now.Power english needs a program which is competitive in price.
Have a great day!
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Hi [이름]! ^ ^
I never realized that you would actually consider taking up a 20 minute class. It could have been nice; if it\'s not about the price.
Wow! Thank you for giving me this information, I definitely have no idea about it! ^ ^ But, 10 minutes or 20 minutes doesn\'t matter as long as we are having a very great conversation every class! ^ ^ Thank you so much! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
Did you have a lunch? Don\\\'t skip your meal for your health!
>>Did you have lunch?
As you said, I also felt that 10 min is not enough to converse in English.
As you said, I also felt that 10 min is not enough to converse in English.
>>As you have mentioned, 10 minutes is quite a short time to practice English.
So, I decided to have 20 min class 2 or 3 times a week.
>>So, I decided to have a 20-minute class; 2 or 3 times a week.
But I found something I could not understand.
But I found something I could not understand.
>>CORRECT
It was very wired because 2 times a week for 20 min class is more expensive than 5 times a week for 10 min class.
It was very wired because 2 times a week for 20 min class is more expensive than 5 times a week for 10 min class.
>>CORRECT (misspelled \"weird\")
I could not understand because as you see, 10 min class is longer than 20 min calss in the total times.
I could not understand because as you see, 10 min class is longer than 20 min calss in the total times.
>>I could not understand because as you see, a 10-minute class is longer than a 20-minute class in total.
And forthermore 20 min class gives just twice writing corrections.( I like writting Essey)
And forthermore 20 min class gives just twice writing corrections.( I like writting Essey)
>>And furthermore; a 20-minute class gives just as twice writing corrections.( I like writing essays)
I called the custumer center of Power English and asked why 20 min class is more expensive than 10 min class.
I called the custumer center of Power English and asked why 20 min class is more expensive than 10 min class.
>>I called the customer center of Power English and asked why a 20-minute class is more expensive than a 10-minute class.
They said that 10 min class is the promotional program to spread Power English in On line English school market.
They said that 10 min class is the promotional program to spread Power English in On line English school market.
>>They said that a 10-minute class is the promotional program to spread Power English in the Online English school market.
I understad now.Power english needs a program which is competitive in price.
I understad now.Power english needs a program which is competitive in price.
>>I understand now that Power English needs a program which is competitive in price.
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