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2019-07-05 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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MOST OF PLAYING SOCCER KIDS WANT TO BE A PROFESSIONAL football player to like being min son. Thank you inviting me. I think it\'s very smart most of secretary in Korea. Who are the people.-i can\'t make the completely sentence using this expression,so I want you to help me. Can you make for example for me? Who is always there in the office? I\'m willing to go with you. Please inform our about the Philippine.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


MOST OF PLAYING SOCCER KIDS WANT TO BE A PROFESSIONAL football player to like being min son.

>>Most of kids who are soccer players want to be a professional football players too like Min Son. 


Thank you inviting me.

>>Thank you foe inviting me. 


I think it\'s very smart most of secretary in Korea.

>>I think secretaries in Korea are very smart. 

Who are the people...

>>Who are the people you\'re going with?

>>Who are the people that you met yesterday?

>>Who are the people asking about your brother?


i can\'t make the completely sentence using this expression,so I want you to help me.

>>I can\'t make complete sentence using this expression, so I want you to help me.


Can you make for example for me?

>>Can you make an example for me?

 Who is always there in the office?

>>CORRECT!

>>Who is always in the office?

 I\'m willing to go with you.

>>CORRECT!

>>I\'m willing to join you.

 Please inform our about the Philippine.

>>Please introduce me about the Philippines.

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