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학생이 쓴 원문
If this moment passed, it is no longer come back.
So people usually hope to remind this moment.
In addition to that, they like to keep a happy memory.
I upload a picture.
That is that I drew it.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
This is painting is gorgeous!
Thank you so much for sharing this. ^^
I would love to see more of your works in the future!
~~t. Ally
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If this moment passed, it is no longer come back.
>> If a moment has passed, we can no longer take it back.
So people usually hope to remind this moment.
>> So people usually hope to be reminded of these moments.
In addition to that, they like to keep a happy memory.
>> CORRECT!
I upload a picture.
>> I uploaded a picture.
That is that I drew it.
>> This is what I painted.
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