homework
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Describe something you could never give away.- (^-^)
I don\'t exactly understand what \'give away\' means.
Do you want to me to describe my confidental secrets?
If you mean that, I would not tell you because everybody can read my homework and then, my secret will be no more secret to me.^^
If you don\'t mean that, Do you mean you want to know something which I couldn\'t throw away?
I have somethings I have been keeping so long.
Let me think,
I still keep my ex-boyfriend\'s T-shirts and some jewellies.
I know, I should have given back to them or thrown away already.
I am sure that my husband knows some of those things but he never aked me where those things came from.
To me, it is very important and memoriable things for them because they were also a parts of my life I have to remember.
I hope I understand today\'s essay topic.
Have a nice weekend and see you on Moday!
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you for this very interesting answer you gave me! You made me smile! ^ ^ I appreciate the effort! ^^
Yes, I mean something that you wouldn\'t like to throw away and not tell me about your secrets! ^ ^ You answered your homework right! ^ ^ Thank you!
Have a nice weekend and call you Monday! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
I don\'t exactly understand what \'give away\' means.
>>Correct
Do you want to me to describe my confidental secrets?
Do you want to me to describe my confidental secrets?
>>Do you want me to share you something confidential?
If you mean that, I would not tell you because everybody can read my homework and then, my secret will be no more secret to me.^^
If you mean that, I would not tell you because everybody can read my homework and then, my secret will be no more secret to me.^^
>>Correct
If you don\'t mean that, Do you mean you want to know something which I couldn\'t throw away?
If you don\'t mean that, Do you mean you want to know something which I couldn\'t throw away?
>>Correct
I have somethings I have been keeping so long.
I have somethings I have been keeping so long.
>>Correct
Let me think,
Let me think,
>>Correct
I still keep my ex-boyfriend\'s T-shirts and some jewellies.
>>Correct (misspelled jewelries)
I know, I should have given back to them or thrown away already.
I know, I should have given back to them or thrown away already.
>>I know I should have given them back to him or thrown away already.
I am sure that my husband knows some of those things but he never aked me where those things came from.
I am sure that my husband knows some of those things but he never aked me where those things came from.
>>Correct (misspelled/typo error with \"asked\")
To me, it is very important and memoriable things for them because they were also a parts of my life I have to remember.
To me, it is very important and memoriable things for them because they were also a parts of my life I have to remember.
>>To me, they are still important and memorable because it\'s a part of my life that I want to remember.
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