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2019-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I recommend him to workout(exercise) with me. because when i was depression or get a lot of stress from something, I always run out side or on trade mill after workout that not only make me feel better but also give me energy. so I\'ll recommend him to workout with me.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Hailey! ^-^


It\'s Monday! I hope your doing alright.

Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I agree with your opinion.

Exercising or having a hobby will help/benefit someone who\'s stressed or depressed.

I will see you later in class!


__T. Mayleen :)


I recommend him to workout(exercise) with me.

>>> I will recommend him to workout/exercise with me.

because when i was depression or get a lot of stress from something, I always run out side or on trade mill
after workout that not only make me feel better but also give me energy.

>>> It\'s because when I\'m stressed, I always run on the treadmill and working out makes me feel happy and energized.

so I\'ll recommend him to workout with me.

>>> That\'s why working out together is a good idea.

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