Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Hailey! ^-^
It\'s Monday! I hope your doing alright.
Thank you for accomplishing your homework. I agree with your opinion.
Exercising or having a hobby will help/benefit someone who\'s stressed or depressed.
I will see you later in class!
__T. Mayleen :)
I recommend him to workout(exercise) with me.
>>> I will recommend him to workout/exercise with me.
because when i was depression or get a lot of stress from something, I always run out side or on trade mill
after workout that not only make me feel better but also give me energy.
>>> It\'s because when I\'m stressed, I always run on the treadmill and working out makes me feel happy and energized.
so I\'ll recommend him to workout with me.
>>> That\'s why working out together is a good idea.
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