Homework
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Which one is better to have a healthy lifestyle:diet or exercise? Why?
Both are important. But, I think that diet is more important than exercise to have a healthy lifestyle. Diet is the foundation of human life. Therefore, first of all , we should have a good/balanced diet habit, and then do an exercise for our healthy life.
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Hello Bella,
Thank you so much for another homework done, good job Bella.
Keep it up! And always take care of your health.
Teacher Annie
Which one is better to have a healthy lifestyle:diet or exercise? Why?
Both are important.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Both are very essential.
But, I think that diet is more important than exercise to have a healthy lifestyle.
>>CORRECT
Diet is the foundation of human life.
>>CORRECT
Therefore, first of all , we should have a good/balanced diet habit, and then do an exercise for our healthy life.
>>But first of all, we should have a balanced diet and then do an exercise for a healthy life.
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