Homework

2019-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: What did you like about school? First, I loved school life because of the lunchtime. I used to play exercises with my friends as soon as I ate lunch. Second, I liked to communicate with my classmate. Even if we saw every day, we used to share about our life. Third, I didn’t need to think about the clothes every morning because of a school uniform and I liked that design. Fourth, even though I needed to get up early morning, I liked school life. It’s because it finished on time. There was no overtime work. Fifth, I liked the high school life the most since I had seen my ex-girlfriend that I loved the best every day at the class.

강사 첨삭

 Hello [이름]

Thank you for you homework. I guess you have to review the corrections that I have made. I know that you do have the capabilities in improving your skills in English. Just keep on learning!!!
Small learning develops into massive learning over time. If you consciously learn new things, you can find yourself speaking the language well. Just continue gaining knowledge from our day to day activities.

T. Jeny



HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: ESSAY: What did you like about school?

First, I loved school life because of the lunchtime.

>>First, I loved school life because of lunchtime.

I used to play exercises with my friends as soon as I ate lunch.
>>correct
Second, I liked to communicate with my classmate.

>>correct

Even if we saw every day, we used to share about our life.
>>Even if we saw each other every day, we used to share our life.
 Third, I didn’t need to think about the clothes every morning because of a school uniform and I liked that design.
>> Third, I don’t need to think about clothes every morning because of the school uniform and I liked the design.
Fourth, even though I needed to get up early morning, I liked school life. It’s because it finished on time.

>>Fourth, even though I needed to get up early morning, I liked school life because it was finished on time. 

There was no overtime work.
>>correct
Fifth, I liked the high school life the most since I had seen my ex-girlfriend that I loved the best every day at the class.

>>Fifth, I liked high school life the most for I could see my ex-girlfriend every day whom I loved in class.

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