Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
The target date day of going to Australia is 16 September.
>>The target date day of going to Australia is 16th of September.
>>The target date day of going to Australia is September 16 .
I\'m afraid I can\'t go there with your guys.
>>CORRECT!
>>I\'m afraid I can\'t go there with you guys.
My job should always bother about safety of kids.
>>CORRECT!
>>My job should always bother about the student\'s safety.
You need to police clearance,if you come in police officers.
>>You need to a get police clearance if you come go to the police station.
Please meet me I have something to tell you.
>>CORRECT!
>>Kindly meet me, I have something to tell you.
I\'m at school.
>>CORRECT!
I\'m at the cafe.
>>CORRECT!
>>I\'m in the café.
Who is always scolding by you?
>>Who is always scolding you?
Who are the girl you loving|?
>>Who is the girl you love?
Who are the man you exercising with?
>>Who is the man you are exercising with?
I would like to take a trip anywhere.
>>CORRECT!
We can also enter everywhere.
>>We can also visit everywhere we want to.
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