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2019-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Ally

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Why do you think is racism a very big issue nowadays? How can racism end? Racism issue is diffcult for me. cause I have don\'t thought abuout that. I think racism has to be disappeared, which is many people are suffered. It\'s not right to judge people as their skin colors or nationalities.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! ^^


Thank you for sharing this with me. ^^

Racism has been an issue for many centuries, and continues to worsen each year.

I agree with you!

It is never right to judge anyone regarding their skin color or nationality.


~t. Ally




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Racism issue is diffcult for me. cause I have don\'t thought abuout that. 

>> The issue about racism is difficult for me because I don\'t really think about it.


 I think racism has to be disappeared, which is many people are suffered.

>> I think racism has to disappear because many people have suffered because of it. 


 It\'s not right to judge people as their skin colors or nationalities.

>> It\'s not right to judge people because of their skin color or nationality.

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