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Hi, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for sharing this with me. ^^
Racism has been an issue for many centuries, and continues to worsen each year.
I agree with you!
It is never right to judge anyone regarding their skin color or nationality.
~t. Ally
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Racism issue is diffcult for me. cause I have don\'t thought abuout that.
>> The issue about racism is difficult for me because I don\'t really think about it.
I think racism has to be disappeared, which is many people are suffered.
>> I think racism has to disappear because many people have suffered because of it.
It\'s not right to judge people as their skin colors or nationalities.
>> It\'s not right to judge people because of their skin color or nationality.
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