homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-Describe a famous person. e.g. a singer or athlete that you admire. Focus on both their appearance and personal traits.- (^-^)
When I read this topic, I realized I don\'t have someone that I admire.
Is it common that we have at least one person whom we respect?
But I don\'t have a person that I can tell \' I admire\'.
When I was child, form time to time, teachers or my parents aked me whom I want to b or I admire.
Most of children answered that they want to be a great man in history or president at that time.
But As I remember, I did not anwered.
I thought about the reason why I could not say right away is that I had never met them.
Therefore I don\'t come to mind a person that I admire until now.
If I have to say that, I would rather say ,\'It\'s my teacher Jedah!\'
I admire her exellent talent of speaking and writting Enlish and beautiful voice. ^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^^
OMG! I am so flattered! ^ ^ Really?!? Thank you so much for the admiration and compliment. I hope your admiration of me will last. I admire you too [이름]. You are such a very amusing student. I like it when students are so jolly and fun to talk to. And you are just that! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
When I read this topic, I realized I don\'t have someone that I admire.
>>Correct
Is it common that we have at least one person whom we respect?
Is it common that we have at least one person whom we respect?
>>Correct
But I don\'t have a person that I can tell \' I admire\'.
But I don\'t have a person that I can tell \' I admire\'.
>>Correct
When I was child, form time to time, teachers or my parents aked me whom I want to b or I admire.
When I was child, form time to time, teachers or my parents aked me whom I want to b or I admire.
>>When I was a child, from time to time; my parents and teachers would ask me the person I admire or want to be.
Most of children answered that they want to be a great man in history or president at that time.
Most of children answered that they want to be a great man in history or president at that time.
>>Most children answered that they want to be a great man in history or president at that time.
But As I remember, I did not anwered.
But As I remember, I did not anwered.
>>But as I remember, I did not give any answers to that question.
I thought about the reason why I could not say right away is that I had never met them.
I thought about the reason why I could not say right away is that I had never met them.
>>Correct
Therefore I don\'t come to mind a person that I admire until now.
Therefore I don\'t come to mind a person that I admire until now.
>>Therefore I have not a single person in mind that I admire until now.
If I have to say that, I would rather say ,\'It\'s my teacher Jedah!\'
If I have to say that, I would rather say ,\'It\'s my teacher Jedah!\'
>>Correct
I admire her exellent talent of speaking and writting Enlish and beautiful voice. ^^
I admire her exellent talent of speaking and writting Enlish and beautiful voice. ^^
>>I admire her excellent skill in speaking and writing English and her beautiful voice. ^^
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