homework
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-Talk about a time in the past when you had to make a difficult decision. Explain what you did and why.- (^-^)
When I was 20\'s, I was really passimistic about my life and wanted to give up this life.
I was a kind of person who never shows my feeling inside and covered with a meaningless smile.
My best friend recommended to go to another country to live a new life.
It was very hard to decide because I \'ve never been out of my country.
I had to think over and over most of nights so long.
At that time, I was sure that I have a courage to finish my life but I did not have a courage to go to another country alone.
When I found myself how much I was coward and stupid, I decided to go to New zlealand.
So, I had been in there for almost 2 years.
It was the one of hardest decision in my life.
What am I thinking about the decision now?
Frankly, I am sure that the decision was the opportunity of turning point of my life which god gave me.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for this wonderful homework. I\'m really beginning to know you a lot better. And I must say aside from being a good person, you are one brave and courageous woman! Admirable! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
When I was 20\'s, I was really passimistic about my life and wanted to give up this life.
>>When I was in my 20\'s, I was really pessimistic about my life and wanted to give up this life.
I was a kind of person who never shows my feeling inside and covered with a meaningless smile.
I was a kind of person who never shows my feeling inside and covered with a meaningless smile.
>>I was that kind of person who covers her emotions with a meaningless smile.
My best friend recommended to go to another country to live a new life.
My best friend recommended to go to another country to live a new life.
>>My best friend recommended that I go to another country to live a new life.
It was very hard to decide because I\'ve never been out of my country.
It was very hard to decide because I\'ve never been out of my country.
>>Correct
I had to think over and over most of nights so long.
I had to think over and over most of nights so long.
>>I gave it a thought for a long time over and over.
At that time, I was sure that I have a courage to finish my life but I did not have a courage to go to another country alone.
At that time, I was sure that I have a courage to finish my life but I did not have a courage to go to another country alone.
>>At that time, I was sure that I have the courage to finish my life but I did not have the courage to go to another country alone.
When I found myself how much I was coward and stupid, I decided to go to New zlealand.
When I found myself how much I was coward and stupid, I decided to go to New zlealand.
>>When I realized how stupid and coward I was, I decided to go to New Zealand.
So, I had been in there for almost 2 years.
So, I had been in there for almost 2 years.
>>So, I lived there for almost 2 years.
It was the one of hardest decision in my life.
It was the one of hardest decision in my life.
>>It was the one of hardest decisions in my life.
What am I thinking about the decision now?
What am I thinking about the decision now?
>>What do I think about that decision now?
Frankly, I am sure that the decision was the opportunity of turning point of my life which god gave me.
Frankly, I am sure that the decision was the opportunity of turning point of my life which god gave me.
>>Frankly, I am sure that the decision was an opportunity to change my life and a turning point which God allowed me to realize.
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