Homework

Good afternoon, Hailey! ^^,)

You chose two topics and you explained your answers very well.

I definitely appreciate your effort. However, be careful with your spelling, punctuation and capitalization. I have made some modifications.

I will see you later in class.^^

Enjoy the rest of the day!

_T. Mayleen :)

A. Do people look better with or without jewelry?

I think people look better with jewerly

>>> I think people look better with jewelry.

CAREFUL WITH YOUR SPELLING. [jewelry]

In my view, people who simply wear dresses and jewelry look more attractive than wearing simple dresses.

>>> In my view, people who wear dresses and jewelry look more attractive than those who wear simple dresses only.

and also people can express their own beauty (trait) to wear jewelry

>>> Also, jewelry can give emphasis to one\'s beauty.

B. Don\'t you think cosmetics are a waste of money?

No, I think cosmetics help people look better and feel better.

>>> CORRECT

In my experience sun block can protect my skin from the sun.

>>> CORRECT

Also, cosmetic(like makeup products) can express myself that I want to show to people.

>>> Also, cosmetics such as makeup products help me express the image I want to show people.

Lip sticks change my mood easily and quickly. so it is worth to spend money.

>>> Lip sticks change my mood easily and quickly so they\'re worth spending my money.