homework
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I don\'t spend a lot of time outdoors. I don\'t know if it sounds a little depressing. I have depression. That\'s why I have insomnia. So I wake up at 2:00 p.m. Because I sleep at dawn. And after reading the book, dinner comes. Sometimes I go downtown, I usually don\'t go out. I like talking to my dad after work.
강사 첨삭
A rainy afternoon Ms. [Name]^^
For me I love going out with my peers and family. But because I am feeling under the weather these days, I prefer staying home and enjoying some coffee and pancakes! - hehehe^^
Sometimes pottering at home is really relaxing!
Thanks for your answer^^ Talk to you soon :)
Writing Task: How much time do you usually spend outdoors each day? Please explain your answer.
I don\'t spend a lot of time outdoors.
>>CORRECT!
I don\'t know if it sounds a little depressing.
>>CORRECT!
I have depression.
>>CORRECT!
That\'s why I have insomnia.
>>CORRECT!
So I wake up at 2:00 p.m.
>>CORRECT!
Because I sleep at dawn.
>>CORRECT!
And after reading the book, dinner comes.
>>CORRECT!
Sometimes I go downtown, I usually don\'t go out.
>>Sometimes I go downtown but I usually don\'t go out.
I like talking to my dad after work.
>>CORRECT!
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