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2019-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Annie

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What are the things that inspired you in your life? Why do they inspire you? I am sorry. I didn\'t understand your last question. So I didn\'t give you answer. After class, when I reviewed the recorded file, I got it. I am inspired by God to be a good man while I alive. So, I am making efforts to be a good man. Because I am [Name].

강사 첨삭

Hello Bella,

It has been so nice to hear your answers every time.

Thank you as always for taking time to answer this simple questions.

Teacher Annie

What are the things that inspired you in your life? Why do they inspire you?

I am sorry. I didn\'t understand your last question. So I didn\'t give you answer.

After class, when I reviewed the recorded file, I got it.

>>(It would be better if you say) I am sorry. I didn\'t understand your last question. So I didn\'t give you an answer.

I am inspired by God to be a good man while I alive. So, I am making efforts to be a good man. Because I am [Name].

>>I am inspired by God to be a good person while I\'m living.

So, I am making efforts to be a good person because I am a Christian.

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