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2019-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I want to detach from my busy life. I don\'t care whether you play soccer not well I would like to inform that about Korea history. Noncancellable-I can\'t make the sentence so if you help me could you tell me when do this word noncancellable use ? It is difficult for me.^^ I\'m wiling to go to your birthday party. I think all of people need to do willingness for other people. I want to cancel my flight ticket if possible. How would you like to pay for purchase? How would you like to eat what kind of food? Have you ever been in Korea? Have you ever tried it before? I don\'t know the rocking chair so I research the rocking chair by internet now I know it.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


I want to detach from my busy life.

>>I want to escape from my busy life.

I don\'t care whether you play soccer not well

>>I don\'t care whether you don\'t play soccer well.

I would like to inform that about Korea history.

>>I would like to disclose about Korea history.


I\'m wiling to go to your birthday party.

>>CORRECT!

>>I\'m wiling to celebrate with your birthday party.

I think all of people need to do willingness for other people.

>>I think willingness should be in people?

I want to cancel my flight ticket if possible.

>>I want to cancel my flight if possible.

How would you like to pay for purchase?

>>How would you like to pay for the goods you purchased?

>>How would you like to pay for the groceries?


How would you like to eat what kind of food?

>>What would you like to eat?

Have you ever been in Korea?

>>Have you ever been to Korea?


Have you ever tried it before?

>>CORRECT!


I don\'t know the rocking chair so I research the rocking chair by internet now I know it.

>>I don\'t know a rocking chair so I researched  on the internet, now I know it.

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