Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are essential items to take with you when you leave the house? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
Especially If our family go to the outsides we take baby\'s things.
I have to prepare for my son\'s things because I am a mother.
It\'s is diapers, wet-tissue, feeding-bottles, baby clothes and so on.
And Most of all I have to ready baby\'s toy. Because we can rest a little^^.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You have a lot of ideas when it comes to your homework.
Keep expressing yourself.
Keep learning new expressions to use in your compositions.
Good luck!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
Especially If our family go to the outsides we take baby\'s things.>> I usually take my baby\'s things when the family goes out of the house.
I have to prepare for my son\'s things because I am a mother.
>> I have to prepare my son\'s things because I am a mother.
It\'s is diapers, wet-tissue, feeding-bottles, baby clothes and so on.
>> These include diapers, wet tissue, feeding bottles, baby clothes and others.
And Most of all I have to ready baby\'s toy.
>> Most importantly, I have to prepare my baby\'s toys.
Because we can rest a little^^.
>> We do this so that we can rest a little.
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