homework

2019-07-11 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

-Tell about a time when you lied to your parents, husband, boss, or teacher.- (^-^) Oh~ Do I have to confess when I lied before? No, I want to remain to you as a good person. ^^ To be honest, I lied a lot and I might lie a few minutes ago. I lie when I don\'t want to meet someone pretending I am sick or I am so busy. Even to my husband I lie everyday. such like\' I am feeling good and I am happy with you\' I really want to show my emotions frankly but it is difficult to me because I don\'t want to hurt someone and screw up somone\'s mood. It means that I lie to myself for others and love ones. Is it too late that I can be honest to myself?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for this homework. I really appreciate the time you put in it! ^ ^

And..you made me really grin and smile with your answers. You are one funny woman, but, honest for that matter. I appreciate the honesty. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

Oh~ Do I have to confess when I lied before?

>>Correct
No, I want to remain to you as a good person. ^^

>>Correct
To be honest, I lied a lot and I might lie a few minutes ago.

>>To be honest, I lied a lot and I might have lied a few minutes ago.
I lie when I don\'t want to meet someone pretending I am sick or I am so busy.

>>Correct
Even to my husband I lie everyday. such like\' I am feeling good and I am happy with you\'

>>Correct
I really want to show my emotions frankly but it is difficult to me because I don\'t want to hurt someone and screw up somone\'s mood.

>>Correct (misspelled \"someone\")
It means that I lie to myself for others and love ones.

>>Correct
Is it too late that I can be honest to myself?

>>Is it too late or can I still start being honest to myself?

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