Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are the responsibilities of a mother to her family? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
First I think that I help to take the good habit to him.
For example, It doing brush teeth before bed and early wake up. If when he eating, it use spoon and fork. Second I help that he doing himself. He wear clothes and eating to himself. Last I think It is very important things that he learn to a way of thinking in life.
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First I think that I help to take the good habit to him.>> First, I think that I need to help my son form good habits.
For example, It doing brush teeth before bed and early wake up.
For example, It doing brush teeth before bed and early wake up.
>> For example, I should teach him to brush his teeth before going to bed and to wake up early.
If when he eating, it use spoon and fork.
>> When he\'s eating, I need to teach him how to use a spoon and fork.
Second I help that he doing himself.
>> I must also guide him to do things for himself.
He wear clothes and eating to himself.
>> He must learn to put on his own clothes and eat by himself.
Last I think It is very important things that he learn to a way of thinking in life.
>> Lastly, I think it is very important that he develops his own way of thinking in life.
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