Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Hailey! ^-^
Smile! It\'s Friday. Your composition is very good.
You explained your answer well and you even gave an example.
Again, be mindful of your punctuation marks.
I hope you\'ll have a fun and safe weekend!
_T. Mayleen :)
I think that\'s why people get sick is stress
>>> I think the reason why people get sick is stress.
I always sick when I feel stress. because stress makes people weak.
>>> I always get sick when I\'m stressed because stress makes people weak.
For example, people usually have stomach pains before or after important events such as presentations. so I think one of the reason people get sick is that people have stress or feel pressure
>>> For example, people usually suffer from a stomachache before or after important events such as presentations. Therefore, people get sick when they\'re stressed or under pressure.
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