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~Teacher Lucy

I think there is value thing more than money.

>>I think there is more valuable thing than money.

It\'s summertime in Korea so many people are gonna go to having water place.

>>It\'s summertime in Korea so many people are going to water adventure park.

There are many customers line up in front of famous food store.

>>There are many customers falling in line in front of  a famous food store.

I think its traditional Korea old women often ask discount in the market.

>>I think its traditional to old women  in Korea to often ask discount in the market.

Good habit make a good person.

>>Good habit makes a good person.

Many tourist like jehu island because of natural environment and taste foods.

>>Many tourists like jehu island because of the natural environment and tasty foods.

I get used to wake up late theseday.

>>I\'m getting used to wake up late these days.

I got used to plan everything of my life it since graduated in college.

>>I get used to plan everything of my life it since graduated in college.

When I was young I almost died at the beach so I\'m scared bathing.

>>When I was young I almost died at the beach, so I\'m scared of bathing.