homework
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-Briefly tell about a movie you saw recently.- (^-^)
I really like to watch movies.
I and my husband usually watch downloaded movies at home on weekend.
Last weekend, we watched a movie which title is \\\' The perfaction\\\'(American movie)
It tells about a girl who want to be a cello player.
She was learning at a famous Cello school but unfortunately she had to give up playing cello for her sick mother.
Many years after, her mother passed away and she invites to the Cello concert in China managing by her Cello school.
She meets her professors and a famous cello player who could enter the school by her qutting the school and who could become a celebrity now. She enjoyes the concert and party and falls in love withe the famous cello player. and ....
hihihi the movie runs just 1and half hours and and very easy to concentrate.
If you like reversal movie, you will enjoy the movie.
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I appreciate the movie recommendation, if I\'ll be able to find time, I would surely love to watch this on the weekend! ^^
-Teacher Jedah
I really like to watch movies.
>>Correct or
>>I really like watching movies.
I and my husband usually watch downloaded movies at home on weekend.
I and my husband usually watch downloaded movies at home on weekend.
>>Correct
Last weekend, we watched a movie which title is \\\' The perfaction\\\'(American movie)
Last weekend, we watched a movie which title is \\\' The perfaction\\\'(American movie)
>>Last weekend, we watched an American movie entitled; \"The Perfection\".
It tells about a girl who want to be a cello player.
It tells about a girl who want to be a cello player.
>>The story is about a girl who wants to be a cello player.
She was learning at a famous Cello school but unfortunately she had to give up playing cello for her sick mother.
She was learning at a famous Cello school but unfortunately she had to give up playing cello for her sick mother.
>>Correct
Many years after, her mother passed away and she invites to the Cello concert in China managing by her Cello school.
Many years after, her mother passed away and she invites to the Cello concert in China managing by her Cello school.
>>Many years after, her mother passed away and she was invited to a Cello concert in China organized by her Cello school.
She meets her professors and a famous cello player who could enter the school by her qutting the school and who could become a celebrity now.
She meets her professors and a famous cello player who could enter the school by her qutting the school and who could become a celebrity now.
>>She meets her professors and a famous cello player who entered the school right about the time she quit school and who is now a celebrity.
She enjoyes the concert and party and falls in love withe the famous cello player. and ....
>>She enjoys the concert and the party and eventually falls in love with the cello player.
hihihi the movie runs just 1and half hours and and very easy to concentrate.
hihihi the movie runs just 1and half hours and and very easy to concentrate.
>>The movie runs for only an hour and a half and it\'s very easy to understand.
If you like reversal movie, you will enjoy the movie.
>>If you like reversal films, you will enjoy this movie.
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