Homework
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What do you feel when everything that is on the news are purely bad news?
It\'s terrible to think about. Most of news on TV are bad news such as complicated diplomatic problems, the gap between rich and poor, economic problems, increase in unemployment, many accidents, and so on.
So I seldom watch TV news to avoid becoming sad feeling. In spite of trying not to watch TV, I have no choice but to hear bad news through other ways.
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday ^^
Bella, thank you so much again for taking time to do this homework.
I totally agree with your opinion about watching TV. I just wish you a happy and fun filled weekend.
Teacher Annie
What do you feel when everything that is on the news are purely bad news?
It\'s terrible to think about. Most of news on TV are bad news such as complicated diplomatic problems, the gap between rich and poor, economic problems, increase in unemployment, many accidents, and so on.
It\'s terrible to think about. Most of news on TV are bad news such as complicated diplomatic problems, the gap between rich and poor, economic problems, increase in unemployment, many accidents, and so on.
>>It\'s terrible to know that most of the news on TV are bad news. Mostly of them are: complicated diplomatic problems, the gap between the rich and the poor, economic problems, unemployment rate, accidents and a lot more.
So I seldom watch TV news to avoid becoming sad feeling.
>>So I seldom watch news on TV for me not to feel sad.
In spite of trying not to watch TV, I have no choice but to hear bad news through other ways.
>>In spite of trying not to watch TV, I have no choice but to hear bad news in other ways.
OR>>Even if I don\'t watch TV, I still hear bad news from other people, from the internet and etc.
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