Homework

Hello [이름],

Nice job on your homework. I hope you\'ll continue to remember and take note of all the things you are learning.

Motivation!!! It is really important to motivate yourself so that you can be victorious with speaking the English language.

T. Jeny

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
ESSAY: How important is a person\'s appearance?
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I read an article regarding that.

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 There was an experiment how much the guys appearance was important to the girl.

>>There was an experiment about how important guy\'s appearance to girls.
 Researcher set 2 cases up to show their hypothesis.

>>The researcher set up 2 cases to show their hypothesis.
 First, he wore short pants, sloppy t-short, and slipper with messy hair in the park.

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There was a paper in front of him.

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Pedestrian who saw him put stickers in the paper which were divided point 1 to 10 as much as they thought about him.

>>Pedestrians who saw him put stickers on the paper to give him a score from 1 to 10 based on his appearance.
Most of them gave their point less than 4 and they thought he has no job, and girlfriend.

>>Most of them gave him less than 4 as his score and they thought he has no job and a girlfriend.
Moreover, they said they would have never accepted if he asked them for a dinner.

>>Moreover, they said that they would refuse if he asked them for dinner.
 Second, the same guy at first experiment wore suit, rubber shoes, and stylish hair.

>>The same thing happened to the second guy but this time he wore a suit, rubber shoes, and had a stylish hair.
 Other pedestrians gave him more than 6 points.

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They thought him as a businessman or sales man.

>>They thought he is a businessman or a salesman.

Furthermore, woman respond they would be willing to receive his propose if he lets her go out a dinner.
>>Furthermore, they responded that they would be willing to go out with him if asked to.
Thus, I have got to shopping mall to buy a nice clothes.

>>Thus, I\'ve got to go to the shopping mall to buy nice clothes.