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2019-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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I made my life until now,more important thing is not over,I will make my future of life than now. Im thinking about improving my English skill,my girlfriend and my working holiday in Australia so I am headache. My known people ask me theseday should you go to Australia for English and make money? He\'s a wonderful guy. I think all women will almost like him. I guess I will be busy next week. I think before we do a project we have to make a plan. Ther are not many people around me who have diabetes. I\'m usually not interested in society but now I\'m not.

강사 첨삭

Thank you [이름]!


~Teacher Lucy


I made my life until now,more important thing is not over,I will make my future of life than now.

>>I\'ve been alone with my life until now and I will make my future better than now.

 Im thinking about improving my English skill,my girlfriend and my working holiday in Australia so I am headache.

>>I\'m thinking on improving my English skills, my girlfriend and working in Australia so I\'m having a headache.

 My known people ask me theseday should you go to Australia for English and make money?

>>The people I know ask me these days, Will you go to Australia learning English or making money?

 He\'s a wonderful guy.

>>CORRECT!

>>He\'s an amazing guy.


 I think all women will almost like him.

>>I think almost women will like him.

 I guess I will be busy next week.

>>CORRECT!

 I think before we do a project we have to make a plan.

>>CORRECT!

>>We have to make a plan before we do the project.

 Ther are not many people around me who have diabetes.

>>There are no diabetic people around.

 I\'m usually not interested in society but now I\'m not.

>>I\'m usually not interested in society.

>>I\'m usually not interested in society but now I\'m am.

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