Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
I made my life until now,more important thing is not over,I will make my future of life than now.
>>I\'ve been alone with my life until now and I will make my future better than now.
Im thinking about improving my English skill,my girlfriend and my working holiday in Australia so I am headache.
>>I\'m thinking on improving my English skills, my girlfriend and working in Australia so I\'m having a headache.
My known people ask me theseday should you go to Australia for English and make money?
>>The people I know ask me these days, Will you go to Australia learning English or making money?
He\'s a wonderful guy.
>>CORRECT!
>>He\'s an amazing guy.
I think all women will almost like him.
>>I think almost women will like him.
I guess I will be busy next week.
>>CORRECT!
I think before we do a project we have to make a plan.
>>CORRECT!
>>We have to make a plan before we do the project.
Ther are not many people around me who have diabetes.
>>There are no diabetic people around.
I\'m usually not interested in society but now I\'m not.
>>I\'m usually not interested in society.
>>I\'m usually not interested in society but now I\'m am.
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