homework
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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think this is the case?
What is the most important thing to succeed in life?- (^-^)
Suddenly, The ants and the grasshopper story comes in mind.
An ant is always working hard for the harsh winter in summer but a grashopper sings and enjoys the summer season without worrying.
But when winter comes, an ant lives at warm house with enough food but a grasshopper does not have food then died(???) I don\\\'t remember at the end of story but I am sure that everyone knows that story.
When we were young we forced to work hard and to be deligent person.
But with my more than 40 years life, I saw many people just like the grasshopper but some of them are wealthy and live happy life.
In conclusion, we never know what will happen to our lives and how the great opportunity comes to us.
Let\\\'s enjoy every momoments with our love ones.!!!
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-Teacher Jedah
Suddenly, The ants and the grasshopper story comes in mind.
>>Suddenly, the ant and the grasshopper story comes in mind.
An ant is always working hard for the harsh winter in summer but a grashopper sings and enjoys the summer season without worrying.
An ant is always working hard for the harsh winter in summer but a grashopper sings and enjoys the summer season without worrying.
>>Correct (misspelled \"grasshopper\")
But when winter comes, an ant lives at warm house with enough food but a grasshopper does not have food then died(???) I don\\\'t remember at the end of story but I am sure that everyone knows that story.
But when winter comes, an ant lives at warm house with enough food but a grasshopper does not have food then died(???) I don\\\'t remember at the end of story but I am sure that everyone knows that story.
>>But when winter comes, an ant lives in a warm house with enough food but a grasshopper does not have food then maybe eventually died.
I don\'t remember at the end of story but I am sure that everyone knows that story.
>>I don\'t remember the end of story but I am sure that everyone knows that story.
When we were young we forced to work hard and to be deligent person.
When we were young we forced to work hard and to be deligent person.
>>When we were young we were forced to work hard and be diligent people.
But with my more than 40 years life, I saw many people just like the grasshopper but some of them are wealthy and live happy life.
But with my more than 40 years life, I saw many people just like the grasshopper but some of them are wealthy and live happy life.
>>Correct
In conclusion, we never know what will happen to our lives and how the great opportunity comes to us.
In conclusion, we never know what will happen to our lives and how the great opportunity comes to us.
>>Correct
Let\\\'s enjoy every momoments with our love ones.!!!
Let\\\'s enjoy every momoments with our love ones.!!!
>>Let\'s enjoy every moment of our lives with our loved ones!
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