homework
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Would you rather use the internet or books as your main source of information? Why?
I use the internet.
because using smartphones, I can find information on the Internet anytime, anywhere.
It has a lot of information and up-to-date information.
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Would you rather use the internet or books as your main source of information? Why?
I use the internet.
>> I would rather use the internet.
because using smartphones, I can find information on the Internet anytime, anywhere.
>>Because I am using smartphones and I can find information on the internet anytime and anywhere.
It has a lot of information and up-to-date information.
>>Correct. or
>> It has a lot of up to date information.
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