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2019-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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when I hear the \'violence \', I spring to mind only negative words. such as \' illegal\',\'danger\', ect... I think that \'violence\' must not happen for any reason. in other words, people can not use violence as a solution to any problem.

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Good day, Hailey! ^-^

It\'s a rainy Tuesday here in my city. I hope you\'re doing fine.

Thank you for accomplishing your homework and again, capitalize those that need to be capitalized.

Punctuation mark is necessary in making sentences. See you later!


__T. Mayleen :)



when I hear the \'violence \', I spring to mind only negative words. such as \' illegal\',\'danger\', ect...

>>> When I hear the word \'violence\', negative terms such as illegal and danger spring to mind.

I think that \'violence\' must not happen for any reason.

>>> For me, violence must not happen for whatever reasons.

in other words, people can not use violence as a solution to any problem.

>>> In other words, people should never use violence as a solution to any problems.

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