Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
She missed a flight time so she didn\'t go.
>>She missed the time of her flight so she didn\'t go.
When I coached children most important things are decision making ability and attitude.
>>When I coached children I always emphasize the most important things, which are the ability in decision making and positive attitude.
The last destination is Brisbane in Australia.
>>> The last destination is Brisbane, Australia.
I guess it\'s a possible scenario.
>>CORRECT!
I\'m thinking how they play soccer before soccer class.
>>CORRECT!
>>I\'m thinking how will they play soccer before the class.
Do you allow me come back home late?
>> Do you allow me to come back home late?
All people have role of each.
>>All people have their own role.
I\'m trying to be a role model for children.
>>I\'m trying to be a role model for the children.
I get used to doing now life.
>> I get used to my life now.
My bad habit is selfish but now I\'m fixing it.
>> My bad habit is selfishness but now I\'m fixing it.
>> My bad habit is selfishness but I\'m fixing it now.
I don\'t remember my good habit.
>> I don\'t remember my good habits.
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