homework
학생이 쓴 원문
-If you could live anywhere else in the world, where would you live? Why? - (^-^ )
I prefer to live at a warm country during 4 seasons like your country.
About ten years ago and until now, when winter comes, I feel my fingers and toes are numb because of my veins(?) cannot carry blood cause of shrinked vein.
For this reason. I have to have a hard time in winter season.
I was born in July, so I thought I am weak in cold. but getting older I feel also hard in summer season too.^^
I hope If it is possile, I live in Philippines when winter comes, and live in Mongolia when summer comes.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for this homework. You never fail to amuse me! ^ ^
Wow what happened? I couldn\'t also decipher whether it\'s a problem with your nerves or with your veins. We can find out more about it, I hope! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I prefer to live at a warm country during 4 seasons like your country.
>>I prefer to live in a warm country, such as yours.
About ten years ago and until now, when winter comes, I feel my fingers and toes are numb because of my veins(?)
About ten years ago and until now, when winter comes, I feel my fingers and toes are numb because of my veins(?)
>>About ten years ago and until now, when winter comes, I feel numbness in my fingers and toes.
cannot carry blood cause of shrinked vein.
>>I guess it has something to do with my nerves, hence, the lack of blood supply to this body parts. (I\'m not so sure about this.^ ^)
For this reason. I have to have a hard time in winter season.
For this reason. I have to have a hard time in winter season.
>>For this reason, I have a hard time during the winter season.
I was born in July, so I thought I am weak in cold.
I was born in July, so I thought I am weak in cold.
>>I was born in July, so I thought I have a weakness for cold weather.
but getting older I feel also hard in summer season too.^^
>>But, as I grow older, I realized, I have also a weakness with the hot season.
I hope If it is possile, I live in Philippines when winter comes, and live in Mongolia when summer comes.
I hope If it is possile, I live in Philippines when winter comes, and live in Mongolia when summer comes.
>>I hope if it is possible to live in Philippines when winter comes, and live in Mongolia when summer comes.
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