Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you for your effort to correct my errors.
I used to check my mistakes on the website since you write the correct sentences and I utter them several times. I can recognize what my habitual speaking problems are. Thank you all the time!!
Homework : What do you usually do in your free time?
I had read books for my book club and learned how to cook well.
However, I have been busy to prepare to enter a graduate school I want.
It’s so hard to enter the school because many people try every year and their capacities are mostly better than mine.
Therefor, I have to study hard in my entire time but I mostly fail to do it. I’ve been studying not only TOEIC Speaking but also Listening and Reading in most of my time except working hours. That’s why I don’t have time to read English newspapers and magazines to succeed an English interview to enter the school.
Anyway, my first goal is to get an enough TOEIC scores to enter the school in one or two months.
강사 첨삭
You are welcome, Cindy! I am happy to help and support you ^^
- Teacher Debbie
Thank you for your effort to correct my errors.
I used to check my mistakes on the website since you write the correct sentences and I utter them several times. I can recognize what my habitual speaking problems are. Thank you all the time!!
>> It is my pleasure to be of help, Cindy. Thank you for appreciating ^^
I used to check my mistakes on the website since you write the correct sentences and I utter them several times. I can recognize what my habitual speaking problems are. Thank you all the time!!
>> It is my pleasure to be of help, Cindy. Thank you for appreciating ^^
Homework : What do you usually do in your free time?
I had read books for my book club and learned how to cook well.
>> correct
However, I have been busy to prepare to enter a graduate school I want.
However, I have been busy to prepare to enter a graduate school I want.
>> However, I have been busy preparing for the entrance exam of the grduate school that I want.
It’s so hard to enter the school because many people try every year and their capacities are mostly better than mine.
It’s so hard to enter the school because many people try every year and their capacities are mostly better than mine.
>> correct
Therefor, I have to study hard in my entire time but I mostly fail to do it.
Therefor, I have to study hard in my entire time but I mostly fail to do it.
>> Therefore, I have to study hard on my free time but I mostly fail to do it.
I’ve been studying not only TOEIC Speaking but also Listening and Reading in most of my time except working hours.
>> I\'ve been studying not only TOEIC Speaking but also Listening and Reading in my free time.
That’s why I don’t have time to read English newspapers and magazines to succeed an English interview to enter the school.
>> That’s why I don’t have time to read English newspapers and magazines to pass an English interview to enter the school.
Anyway, my first goal is to get an enough TOEIC scores to enter the school in one or two months.
Anyway, my first goal is to get an enough TOEIC scores to enter the school in one or two months.
>> Anyway, my first goal is to pass the TOEIC exam to enter the school in one or two months.
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