Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you [이름]!
~Teacher Lucy
I always experiment my programs to find out what do children need to do at that age.
>>I always experiment programs to find out what do children need at a certain age.
I think the society of Korea is rotten so we need to changes.
>> I think the society of Korea is rotten so we need to change.
>> I think the society of Korea is rotten so we need changes.
I want it I will make a good soccer player and a good person.
>>I want to be a good soccer player and a good person.
We need to many resources for making a bibimbap.
>>We need to have resources in making a bibimbap.
Do you allow me to marry your daughter?
>>CORRECT!
>>Would you allow me to marry your daughter?
How much did you pay for the food?
>>CORRECT!
>>How much is the bill?
I want to make a lot of bucks than when I am [Name].
>>CORRECT!
>>When I am in Korea I want to save money.
Don\'t touch me while I play computer game.
>>Don\'t touch me while I\'m playing computer games.
Who is your friend with going to Australia?
>>Who are you going with in Australia?
It was difficult but we could do it
>>It was difficult but we can do it.
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