homework
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I think good food and good friends are really important. This is because it is good to create a good atmosphere and good things, and good food and good friends contribute a lot to good parties.Of course, I think there is more to it than good food and good friends.
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Writing Task: Good food and good friends is all you need for a great party. Do you agree? Why? Why not?
I think good food and good friends are really important.
>>CORRECT!
This is because it is good to create a good atmosphere and good things, and good food and good friends contribute a lot to good parties.
>>CORRECT!
Of course, I think there is more to it than good food and good friends.
>>CORRECT!
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