homework
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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think this is the case?
What is the most important thing to succeed in life?
The succeeful is the most important of confidence.
If I believe in a can do attitude, I can do everything.
Don't give up and I will success.
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Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^^
Thank you for your thoughts here too. It\'s very short but quite straight to the point. ^ ^
Just because someone failed in school, it does not mean that they cannot become successful in life. Success is actually a byproduct of hard work and perseverance. Academic qualification will certainly improve a person’s chances of achieving success but it is not a pre-requisite. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
The succeeful is the most important of confidence.
>>Confidence is the most important formula for success.
If I believe in a can do attitude, I can do everything.
If I believe in a can do attitude, I can do everything.
>>If I believe in a \"can do attitude\", I can do everything.
Don\'t give up and I will success.
>>If I wouldn\'t give up, I will succeed.
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