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2019-07-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Jedah! \"Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever.\" I love this saying, it really touches my mind. I will keep in mind. I konw other saying. \"Today is the day that people who died are eager to live desperately.\"(Do you undertad? I translate in English^^) When I feel tired of my life and get bored with repeat life, I recall this saying. I think everyone need to remember at least one touched saying in mind to cheer them up. Time is ticking, Enjoy your every moments! See you tomorrow!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for this. You are one deep and inspiring person. ^ ^

I appreciate your thoughts on this. Yes, I do that too. I always try to remember or read quotes that would inspire me to push forward even life sometimes is tough! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

\"Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever.\"

>>Correct
I love this saying, it really touches my mind.

>>I love this saying, it really touches my heart.

I will keep in mind.

>>I will keep it in mind.
I konw other saying.

>>I know another saying.

>>I know other sayings.

\"Today is the day that people who died are eager to live desperately.\"

>>Correct

(Do you undertad? I translate in English^^)

>>Do you understand? I translated it in English ^^
When I feel tired of my life and get bored with repeat life, I recall this saying.

>>When I feel tired of my life and get bored with my monotonous life, I always try to recall this saying.
I think everyone need to remember at least one touched saying in mind to cheer them up.

>>I think everyone needs to remember at least one saying in their minds to cheer them up.

Time ticking,

>>Correct

Enjoy your every moments!

>>So, we must enjoy every moment of our lives!

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