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학생이 쓴 원문
Q: Do you think there should be playgrounds in the park?
A: I think there should be lots of playgrounds in the park because children needs a place to play. But now days there’s lots of find dusts so I would want to play in indoor playground.
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강사 첨삭
Hello Monica! Thank you for this. You\'re right, the fine-dust problem in your country is beco[이름]g serious. Being outside is dangerous.
- T. Beth
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I think there should be lots of playgrounds in the park because children needs a place to play. >>> I think there should be lots of playgrounds in the park because children need a place to play.
But now days there’s lots of find dusts so I would want to play in indoor playground.
>>> But nowadays, there are lots of fine dusts so I would want to play in indoor playground.
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