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What is the most beautiful among the 7 Wonders of the World for you? Why?
I don\'t know much about the 7 Wonders of the world. But what I know a little bit is about pyramid . Pyramid is the only remained among the Wonders of the world. I wonder how to make such a beautiful architecture without special tools and equipments. I wonder how to pile 2,300,000 stones of each 2.5 tons in triangle from. Wonderful.
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What is the most beautiful among the 7 Wonders of the World for you? Why?
I don\'t know much about the 7 Wonders of the world.
I don\'t know much about the 7 Wonders of the world.
>>CORRECT
But what I know a little bit is about pyramid .
>>But I know a little about the Pyramids in Egypt.
Pyramid is the only remained among the Wonders of the world.
>>The Pyramids in Egypt are the only remaining site among the Seven Wonders of the World.
I wonder how to make such a beautiful architecture without special tools and equipments.
>>I\'m just curious; how did they made such a beautiful architectural design without using any modern tools and equipment.
I wonder how to pile 2,300,000 stones of each 2.5 tons in triangle from. Wonderful.
>>I just wonder; how did they pile 2,300,000 stones in a triangle when each stone actually weighs 2.5 tons.
That\'s just wonderful!
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