Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Hailey! ^-^
It\'s a fun-filled Thursday. I hope you\'re doing fine.
Thank you for finding time to do your homework.
I\'ve heard a lot about Incheon. I\'m sure it\'s indeed a beautiful city.
See you later.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
Incheon is known as a trading city
>>> CORRECT
.because Incheon have not only a big airport but also a port.
>>> It\'s because Incheon not only has a big airport and but also a port.
So, I can see many foreigners, so I get many opportunities to interact with them. 
>>> Hence, there are many foreigners in my city and I get to interact with them.
Plus, people can easily go to other cities because the transportation in Incheon is well done
>>> Also, people can easily go in and out of the city because the transportation system is well done/very good.
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